Grammar and Citations: There were no grammar problems that were visible, and the citations were in the right format.
Signal Phrases, Citations, and Work cited page: Many different signal phrases example “Currently, however, according to the U.S. Department of Veterans Affairs, the official estimate of the American veteran population is approximately 24,816,000 (“Veteran”). “ Citations are clear and numerous. A good work cited page that goes over all quotes and citations.
Persuasion: With all of the work cited and evidence to support their claim the writer was persuading and fair on their topic because they cited counter evidence to their own topic.
Built: The writing was organized and well done, I did not get lost at any point in the essay.
Sources: The writer had 19 sources. There were several peer-reviewed journal articles of 8 or more pages.
Conclusion: The conclusion was well thought out and reinstated the argument they made in their thesis. I wouldn't say I agree with the author but they definitely showed a side and backed up the evidence thoroughly.
Good work!
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